Puzzle Strategy for the UC Prompts
By Quetzal Mama • September 12, 2016
Copyright 2016 Roxanne Ocampo
When it comes to the UC prompts, one of my most commonly
asked questions is, “Hey Quetzal Mama, what’s a killer strategy
for the Personal Insight prompts?”
Since students want the shortest answer possible, I give them the
simplest strategy. Think of the prompts
like a puzzle – your 4-D puzzle. You get
four puzzle pieces to fully describe your personal background. Because you get four, you’ve gotta pick four
angles that tells the UC why you
would be an awesome addition to the entering freshman class.
I know you’ve got 20 different selling points, but you’ve
got to narrow it down and pick the top four that best exemplifies your key
strengths.
That means, don’t write all four prompts using the same
topic. That would be four identical
puzzle pieces – won’t fit. And, don’t
just focus on academic topics – because you are more than your academics. Most importantly, don’t assume the UC’s know
your angles just because they have your demographics, transcript, and test
scores.
Alright, so what kinds of things should you tell
them? Here are several puzzle pieces to
give you an idea of how to highlight your UC application. These are only examples! Remember, you need to
pick four angles:
The 4-D
Puzzle
Your Hustle – Everyone has 24 hours in
a day, but only some students work
those 24 hours. You are one of
them. Do you take care of your younger
siblings while juggling homework and extra-curriculars? Do you lead the Mock Trial Team while earning
A’s in AP Calculus and Captain of the Varsity Tennis team? Do you work a part-time job to help your
family make ends meet? Then you’ve got
your hustle on! Tell the UC readers
about your hustle. You’re a go-getter
and you make things happen. They want to
know this. This puzzle piece works
really well with Prompts #1, 4, 5, & 8.
Your Outside of Class Time Stuff – How
do you spend your time when the 3:05 bell rings? Do you stay after and play sports? Lead a club?
Ride your bike to the local elementary school to tutor 3rd graders in
math? Aside from after school, how do
you spend your weekends? Do you dance ballet folklorico? Attend chess tournaments? Compete in skateboarding competitions? Use this prompt to share your extracurricular
activities – which is a perfect fit for prompt # 7, but also for #1, 2, &
6.
Your Academic
Superstardom – You are a scholar, period.
Otherwise, you wouldn’t be applying to the University of
California. Seriously – did you know
that only 20% of Latino students in California meet the qualifying criteria to
even apply to a UC? Now that you know
you’re special, you’ve got to tell them about your awesomeness. Now is not the time to be shy or humble. Tell them why you took 7 AP courses. Yeah, you could have taken the easy route, but
you challenged yourself because your dream is bioengineering. Or, tell them you took it upon yourself to
take online courses in Molecular & Cell Biology. Yep, because your heart is set on Medical
School one day. Whichever angle you
take, just know they have your full transcript.
You don’t need to list your classes or grades. But, although they have your transcript, they
don’t know why you pushed yourself academically. Tell them!
This topic works exceptionally well with prompts 3, 6, & 8.
Your Cultural & Ethnic Stuff – If you belong to MEChA,
Latinas Unidos, Latino Student Union, or any other cultural/political group
that promotes your heritage and identify, then you’ve got a story they want to
read. This piece of the puzzle is
important because it sets you apart from other California students who may not
be culturally aware (or even care!). Why
does it matter? Because the UC’s know
you’ll bring a unique awareness and perspective to their classrooms, and that
benefits all students. This
background information is especially important for students applying to UC campuses
with some of the lowest numbers of underrepresented students (that means
Latinos, African-Americans, or Native Americans), including UC San Diego and UC
Berkeley. Use this puzzle piece for
Prompts #8, and even #2.
Your Passion – How and why did you pick
the major you intend to declare? Why do
you love it? Why this major and none
other? How old were you when you figured
out you would pursue a career that requires this major? What have you done in your spare time related
to this major? Did you pursue summer
enrichment programs? Did you take a
class at a community college? Did you
create an app where you used skills related to your major? Use this puzzle piece to respond to several prompts
including #1, 2, 3, 6, 7, & 8.
Your Obstacle Courses – what challenges
have you faced in your trajectory to college?
And please don’t say, “I got a C in Physics.” We’re talking about real challenges like growing up in a single parent household;
attending a low-resourced school that doesn’t offer AP or IB curriculum; Being
first in your family to attend college.
Now those are real challenges.
The key here is not to cite a long list of challenges, or convey a
whiney or victim persona. List the
challenge and provide a quick summary of the back story, and then
tell them what you did to navigate the challenge. That’s what they want to know, so cut to the
chase. This puzzle piece fits perfectly
with Prompt # 5, but also with prompts #3, 4, & 8.
Your Leadership Talents – First,
remember that leadership is not defined in the iconic, “Class President” kind
of way. Leadership takes many shapes and
forms. Yeah, really. If you’re in charge of the bills in your
home, then you have financial leadership skills. If you’re responsible for getting all of your
siblings home on the bus, then you have team leadership skills. If you serve as the Community Service Chair
for your MEChA chapter, then you have organizational leadership skills. Of course, the iconic things work well too –
like Captain of the Cross Country Team, or President of the Pre-Med
Society. But other things like leading a
fundraising event, or leading a protest rally in your city – those are also
strong leadership examples. Use this
puzzle piece for Prompts # 1, 3, & 8.
Now
that you’ve got some puzzle pieces on your radar, you can customize your own
puzzle. The key is to present yourself
as definitively as possible, by showing them four distinct pieces of your life
puzzle.
Hope
you’re not puzzled anymore about the UC prompts. Ouch, corny.
Sorry about that! But get on it
and write your prompts . . . they’re due in 11 weeks.
—Quetzal
Mama out!